We showed the 30 second draft of our video to our peers to get their feedback. The main feedback we received was about the emotion of the characters in the video, some thought that the parents arguing did not contain enough anger and when Megan left the house she looked like she was smiling. Also, the tiny bit of silence between audio and visuals was jarring and many wanted the song to start with the first shot of arguing. In addition, Nadia (who played the mother,) did not look convincing as a mother. However, we have gathered that it may just be because the group we selected know Nadia. We will show the clip to other groups and ask for their feedback and see is the same answers reoccur.
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